PROSE POEM: WE DON'T ALWAYS HAVE A NAME FOR BEAUTY...

photo by Alex Lear

 

 

 

we don’t always have a name for beauty…


who can remember anything in its totality, in its full specificity? i can’t remember what i was thinking two minutes ago when i saw this young sister raise her hand. or what i thought was raising her hand. we were in class, but she was just smoothing her long black hair, gathered in the back with one of those elastic things with little balls on the end of it that girls know the name of and use to hold their hair in place, and this young woman-to-be who reminds me of another person who was in a class i visited last year, similar skin and body shape, round face and delightful way of smiling with her eyes, she has, the one who raised her hand, has pink balls in her hair, and i can remember that, remember how her eyes shone when we looked at her and asked her what did she have to say and she said “nothing, i was just…” and then she made that gesture, a gesture that feels like soft september rain, warm on my face….

 

—kalamu ya salaam

3 responses
I am always amazed at how much beauty, passion, and power you are able to create or generate with such a subtlety of style. Your word choice is never overly elaborate yet it is precise while still remaining authentic--that is, you capture the poetic tone, texture, and, most importantly, meaning of common or daily living and the people who manage to be uncommon, who manage to be beautiful, regularly and daily by just being themselves. It’s not just that I know that girl; I know that moment, both of the moments in the poem. The moment of seeing the young girl and the moment of realizing that she reminds me of someone else, of my childhood, of a girl I admired, of the woman that girl become, of a longing for “when I was a nappy-headed little boy”. And the fact that you are able to generate all of this with such a subtlety of style is amazing and affirms something I read by you years ago that you had a teacher who taught you to be responsible for every word that you use.
Ab SOUL utely Beautiful Your words are seen Baba " a gesture that feels like soft september rain, warm on my face…."
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